I will say, it loops quite nicely. The overall tone of this song is dark and eerie, which makes it a good song. Sadly I've been noticing a trend. The songs are always so short. Though it loops nicely, I can't help but to feel not only are you keeping the songs short, but your talents as well. And I WILL keep saying this; you have a nice talent. You know how to make some good music, even if you're just practicing or still learning or whatever. I would love to see songs like this, and others that really dig deep into your skills. I still like this song, don't get me wrong, but try to really aim high, and take some time to really make your music pop. Just keep on a going. :D
Thank you so much :)
I appreciate all this praise! >w<
I'm currently working on a new song, I've spent a good 10 hours on it so far xD Ill upload it soon! :D
My Emotions are conflicting at the moment. I don't know if I should be dancing with joy, or be depressed...
But hey, I love it! There isn't a thing that I would change. This is brilliant.
This sounds great! I really like the tune you have here. The only thing is there seems to be one thing missing. A base? Maybe, but it just sounds like it needs just a bit of an extra oomph. It's still good, but it can use just a little bit more to make my bones rattle and my skin melt off my body. In a good way. All in all, nice work!
Thank you! And yes, I do agree with you it needs a bit me oomph.
I think a bass and maybe upping the drums a bit.
It sounds so beautiful, but UHG it's so short! You have so much potential, you can still do a lot but it almost seems, incomplete. Don't get me wrong, what you have here is grate! Don't be afraid to add just a bit more though. I really want to give it a 5/5, but... it just doesn't quench my thirst. It's like you gave me just a drop of the most delicious beverage known to man but you won't give me more.
You have something great going, Have fun with the crescendos, the decrescendos, speed it up slow it down make it broad and biog and majestic or slow and solemn, You can do a lot, just don't limit yourself! You have the skill to make something great out of this!
This is the only dubstep I listen too. I'm not a fan but you are an exception with this song. It fits, it's the perfect theme for all the monsters in my head. I've had this song downloaded for a while and I am yet to be tired of it. I like it because, even though it's not my genre of music, it fits monsters, it fits my beasts, my own sick little human flesh starving creations. And nice screaming voice, if you know what I mean.
None the less, I love it. Every word every chord and every Wub,
It's like I'm looking into the very darkest regions of my mind, finding a path of memories I have long forgotten, little flowers coming to life, only to die as I try to touch them. All my dreams, watching from behind me like I am a stranger, though I knew them once before. Yet they never greet me; they leave me to travel my own dark path. I see visions of times I once cherished but had to let go, Everything behind me is falling into the black as I descend farther. I see very few that I am glad to remember, just to walk past them, seeming like I'm trying to find a reason to either go foreword into the past that I am all but loved by, or to the future where it is now dark and unpromising?
It's such a gentle, song... it makes me cold, but it makes me think, and that is what a song should do. Make you think, come up with a story in your own words, and...connect, which this song did. Well done.
That is a dark story, and it fits the music perfectly. I've felt so similar to your description after tragedies in life. I would let my mind wander to happier times that felt so very real and warm, but they would disappear the moment I try to reach out and touch them. I'd travel further and further back in time trying to re-experience a moment of respite, but each one would fade into the black. I'd try to rationalize. If I keep going back, maybe I can escape the pain of the present? After enough time, every memory would fade and I'd realize that the past cannot be reclaimed; only admired and appreciated from afar. But at that moment, with all the lights from the past gone, the path to the future would become a bit brighter, and I'd realize that the future was mine to create. It was a path full of potential memories for me to create. That thought would somehow reassure me, and I'd finally look forward.
thank you for the thoughtful review.
Ahh Lavender town, my favorite creepy song.
I have to say, your version not only sounds wicked, but it also seems to complement the disturbing quality of what is Lavender town. It's dark, morbid, chilling, but in it's on way, lovely and beautiful. Also, it loops together perfectly. It's short, but I guess as long as it's on repeat, I can't complain.
Wonderful job. Here's a banana for excellence.
Ooooh! Thank you sooo much! :D
*takes banana and treasures it forever.*
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